claudepage asked: Bonjour, i just wanted to say that your poetry is beautiful and inspiring and i was just wondering if you have the time if you could look at my attempts at poetry and give me feed back (if you have time)
Thanks :) and keep up the good work

Thanks!  I’ll take a look and get back to you when I can 

Sleeping in an inescapable prism,

Sibling explicit hibernationism Infinite entrapment,

ravenous detachment Feeling so desensitized,

All seems so synthesized.

I view the world through my cameracameratic picture box,

Recorded for future horror,

lucid horror dreams,

Got my own T.J. Eckleburg eyes…

Inapplicable reagents, a nonexistent Rogaine

Trains travel only two directions, destinations, zero determinations;

motivations? which will be your’s?

Tortured twisted twizted goals

Progression vs. regression;

machina malfunction ceasing further function

Always mentioning, pure obsessioning.

Only inducing infliction, I fucking hate these addictions.

This entity: I am the man in a box

Plaqued body cavities are irreversed, repent! Repent!

“Accept God as you know Him!”

Pray daily, depend! Depend!

So A.A.-bsolutely dependent, the disease is permanent

Initial ways appear vague, Nightmareish ways hasten the plague.

These drug addicted creatures only worsen with age.

Written by moi.

‎”I’m pretty smart if I say so myself. This afternoon, we walked into a fruit store, and the clerk thinks I’m some out-of-town hick. Those apples will be two bucks each, he tells me. I pass over a five. And as he’s about to give me a dollar change, I say keep it, we’re even. On the way in, I stepped on a grape.